i'm gone, i'm alone, (5)
and you won't even pick up the phone, (9)
bet you're gone, (gone) (4)
you're with her, (her) (4)
a substitute for me, the real thing. (9)
(chorus:)
substitute me for another girl, (9)
is she like me, is she out of this world? (10)
substitute me for another friend, (9)
are you tellin' me that this is the end? (10)
you helped me up from my self-caused misery,(10)
made me shine for all the world to see,(10)
you'd lift me up whenever i was down, (10)
but now you've knocked me out for the count.(9)
(chorus)
but lately i have started to see, (see) (9)
me for me, (me) (3)
and not what you want me to be (be) (8)
and once i was so small inside, (8)
but now life is different, (6)
now it's me that's you're missin', (7)
but there's no subsitute. (6)
(chorus)
you used to be my light, (only mine) (6)
you were my reason to fight, (my reason) (7)
but now for you the tables have turned, (9)
and this, baby, it's what you earned. (8)
a cold dose of reality; (8)
substitutes will never come for free. (9)
(chorus)
parenthesis contain beat counts. notnotnot syllable counts. sorry, folks.
(it's actually a little different. not a typo.)
this is a rough draft mind you.
so i know it sucks. |:
you need not tell me that.
zo-zo and matia, if you read this, e-mail me.
i needs your feedback.
other people will help.
may the F.U.N.K. be with you.
(as much as you deserve, that is.)
blitzoftheF.U.N.K.
p.s.: it sucks! i know! ):< so don't remind me.
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hey blitzey! it's m. i love the song btw. you never told me you started a new blog!!! w/e e-mail me who #3 is plz!!! or you could just make a list of all the nicknames and their real names and e-mail it to me that would be cool. byebye!!!!
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m.
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